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How to Write a Proper Email

Spencer LanoueSpencer Lanoue
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Crafting the perfect email is an art form that combines clarity, brevity, and a touch of personality. Whether you're reaching out to a potential employer, coordinating with a colleague, or simply dropping a quick note to a friend, knowing how to write a proper email can make a significant difference. In this guide, we'll cover everything from crafting the perfect subject line to signing off with style, ensuring your emails are clear, effective, and well-received.

Starting Strong: The Subject Line

Your subject line is the first thing your recipient sees, and it's your chance to make a great first impression. It should be concise yet informative, giving the reader a clear idea of what to expect. Think of it as the headline of an article. If it doesn't grab attention, the rest might go unnoticed.

  • Keep it short: Aim for no more than 6-8 words.
  • Be specific: "Meeting Agenda for March 3rd" is more effective than "Meeting Details."
  • Use action words: Words like "Update," "Request," or "Invitation" indicate the email's purpose.

Here's an example of a strong subject line:

Subject: Feedback Request for Project Proposal

Getting the Greeting Right

Much like a handshake, your greeting sets the tone for the entire email. It's important to match the formality of your greeting with the nature of your relationship with the recipient.

  • Formal: Use "Dear [Name]" for more professional or formal emails.
  • Casual: A simple "Hi [Name]" works well for colleagues or familiar contacts.
  • Group: Use "Hello Team" or "Hi Everyone" for multiple recipients.

For instance, if you're emailing a potential employer:

Dear Mr. Smith,

Crafting the Opening Line

The first line of your email should serve as a brief introduction or greeting. It sets the stage for the rest of your message. It's often helpful to include a pleasantry or a reference to a previous interaction.

Consider these examples:

Thank you for your prompt response to my last email.
I hope this message finds you well after the weekend.

The Body: Clearly Conveying Your Message

The main body of your email is where you dive into the details. This section should be clear, concise, and well-organized. Use paragraphs or bullet points to break up information and make it easier to digest.

  • State your purpose: Begin with a clear statement of why you're writing.
  • Provide context: Offer background information if necessary.
  • Use bullet points: Highlight key points or action items for clarity.

Here's how you might structure a request for feedback:

I'm writing to gather your feedback on the proposal I submitted last week. 
Please let me know what you think about the following points:
- The projected timeline
- Budget estimates
- Potential risks

The Art of the Call to Action

Every email should have a purpose, and often that purpose involves prompting the recipient to take some form of action. A clear call to action (CTA) tells the reader exactly what you want them to do next.

  • Be direct: Use clear, concise language.
  • Set a deadline: If applicable, provide a timeline for the action.
  • Keep it simple: One CTA per email is usually sufficient.

Example of a strong CTA:

Please review the attached document and send your feedback by Friday.

Closing with a Signature

How you sign off your email is just as important as how you start it. Your closing should reflect the tone of the email and your relationship with the recipient.

  • Formal: Use "Sincerely" or "Best regards" for professional emails.
  • Casual: "Thanks" or "Cheers" work well for friendly exchanges.
  • Include your name: Always sign off with your full name, especially in professional emails.

Example:

Sincerely,  
Jane Doe

Proofreading: The Final Touch

Before hitting send, it's essential to proofread your email. Mistakes can undermine your message and make you appear unprofessional. Check for grammar, spelling, and clarity.

  • Read aloud: This can help catch errors you might miss when reading silently.
  • Double-check recipients: Ensure you're sending to the correct person or group.
  • Test links: If your email includes links, make sure they work.

Interestingly enough, Spell can help streamline this process. With its built-in AI, it can catch errors and suggest improvements, saving you time and ensuring your emails are polished.

Attachments: When and How to Use Them

If your email includes attachments, it's important to mention them in the body of the email. This ensures the recipient knows to look for them and understands their relevance.

  • Keep files small: Large files can be difficult to download or may be blocked.
  • Use clear file names: Name your files so the recipient knows what they contain.
  • Mention in the email: Let the recipient know you've attached files.

Example:

I've attached the meeting agenda and last month's report for your review.

Common Mistakes to Avoid

Even the most seasoned email writers can fall into common traps that detract from their message. Here are a few pitfalls to watch out for:

  • Overloading with information: Keep your emails concise and to the point.
  • Neglecting the subject line: A vague subject line can lead to an unopened email.
  • Forgetting to proofread: Typos and errors can leave a negative impression.

By keeping these common mistakes in mind, you can enhance the effectiveness of your emails. And if you find yourself struggling, remember that Spell can offer suggestions to refine your writing and keep your communications sharp.

Using Spell for Email Writing

Spell offers a range of features that can help you draft, polish, and perfect your emails quickly and efficiently. Here’s how it works:

  • Draft in seconds: Use natural language prompts to generate a first draft.
  • Edit with ease: Highlight text and tell Spell what changes you'd like to make.
  • Collaborate in real-time: Share your draft with colleagues and make live updates together.

Whether you're drafting a quick note or a detailed proposal, Spell can streamline the process, allowing you to focus on the content rather than the mechanics.

Final Thoughts

Writing a proper email is all about clarity, purpose, and attention to detail. By following these simple guidelines, you'll be able to craft emails that are not only effective but also leave a lasting impression. And if you'd like a little help along the way, Spell can assist in drafting, refining, and perfecting your emails, making the process quicker and easier.

Spencer Lanoue

Spencer Lanoue

Spencer has been working in product and growth for the last 10 years. He's currently Head of Growth at Sugardoh. Before that he worked at Bump Boxes, Buffer, UserTesting, and a few other early-stage startups.